WEEK 7 CRITIQUE PRELIM CRIT NOTES

 This week I sat down with Steve Cross, Robert Bejach, and Abdulmoiz to critique the progress of my visual explanation project. Steve's critique focused on the value. He mentioned that I can play a little more with the mesh tool to get more pronounced tones and contrast. Robert's critique was more about the organization of the layers and how they need to be illustrated if they are going to be presented individualy. Abdulmoiz pointed out that though there is a lot of visual engagement, I am still lacking the project statement to really communicate the whole point of the illustration.